Thursday 15 September 2016

Persuasive argument about schools and learning in the future

WALT: write a persuasive argument about schools and learning in the future.

In my opinion it is an extremely good idea that schools are changing to become better schools to assist a future child's learning.

Using computers, Ipads and other technology is helping children with their learning because they can do their work online and learn to use a computer for when they are older.  When we use computers we are saving trees because paper comes from trees and if we use up all the trees then we will die because there won’t be any oxygen. It is a fact that nobody would like for that to happen.

Secondly, I feel that we should have verandahs where children can go outside and work whenever they want. This is because some people prefer to work in nature’s spaces or in a quiet area. In the future Oaklands school should have an adventure playground for each year level. I believe that they should be challenging so kids would be thinking about what to do and their brains would be thinking and learning which would help in the classroom.

Lastly, I think that we should have special walls and ceilings that  are soundproof, this would help because some people prefer to work in quiet spaces by themselves. There should be special areas so people can do so.  The future Oaklands should also have separate learning spaces so people can work alone and have a cubby of their own. I think that this would help learning because if you want to work alone or you need some peace and quiet you can go to your cubby. Furthermore, Oaklands School should get whiteboard tables so if you’re working something out you can just write it down and then rub it out rather than using paper and losing oxygen.

Overall, I believe that it is critical that Oaklands School has all of the things that are in my argument because they WILL most definitely benefit a child's learning and make them a smarter and better person.

Next step; my next step is to use more persuasive language in my writing and to have more detailed description.

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Future Classroom
Library- the library is at the front on the left, it has a couch, a bean bag, a tree bookshelf and lots of cushions; it is the perfect place to read and relax.

Walls- the walls are good for learning because they make the room bright and colourful to encourage a child’s learning. On the walls there is a pieces of abstract art, self portraits, a tree book shelf, a hanging dolphin and the teacher’s white board. The walls are located next to the floor and the sky!

The teacher’s area- the teachers area is a good working space to learn so that the teacher can help you on what you want to know. The teachers area is located at the left top corner of the classroom.

Individual Cubbies- the individual cubbies are all along the wall on the right side, they are a great place to learn especially if you like to work on your own or in a silent space; you can put all of your own belongings in your cubby.

The mat- the mat is in front of the teacher’s whiteboard and is in the middle of the room. It is colourful and has a pretend log at the back that is a tunnel and a backrest and it can flip over to provide more space for the children to sit on.


What changes do I need to make to achieve excellence in school design?
     
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Multistructural
Teacher Directed
Relational
Learner Directed
Extended Abstract
Learner Autonomous
I can describe several ideas for creating school designs.

What changes do I need to make to achieve excellence in school design?



I can describe several ideas for creating school designs.

And

I can compare and contrast ideas between Oaklands School in 2016 and what it could look like in the future.
I can describe several ideas for creating school designs.

And

I can compare and contrast ideas between Oaklands School in 2016 and what it could look like in the future.

And

I can look at these qualities in a new way by creating and presenting an idea for what Oaklands School might look like in the future.


What changes do I need to make to achieve excellence in school design?
     
6a010535c2fe6b970c0133f482335b970b-pi

Multistructural
Teacher Directed
Relational
Learner Directed
Extended Abstract
Learner Autonomous
I can describe several ideas for creating school designs.

What changes do I need to make to achieve excellence in school design?



I can describe several ideas for creating school designs.

And

I can compare and contrast ideas between Oaklands School in 2016 and what it could look like in the future.
I can describe several ideas for creating school designs.

And

I can compare and contrast ideas between Oaklands School in 2016 and what it could look like in the future.

And

I can look at these qualities in a new way by creating and presenting an idea for what Oaklands School might look like in the future.

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